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Fluffon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 166 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:49 pm | |
| These forums have to have a writing section! Anyway...here's something I wrote up when I was bored. If you don't like MxM then don't read. Let me put you up to date. Alexander Drake is a dog-boy with dog-ears. Deal with it...in the novel it actually serves as a purpose. Anyway he's a pretty decent cook for a person his age. Jake Matthews is a cat-boy with cat-ears. Deal with it....in the novel it actually serves as a purpose. Anyway...he's older than Alex by a few months, but shorter. It's a scrap because it fricken sucks! Seriously, I didn't even bother making it extra romantic or steamy, and I didn't even care to run it through any editing. If you care to see the real novel then just ask. - Spoiler:
“I can’t believe it…” Jake gasped in awe as he stood with Alex in front of a stunning apartment complex in which they were in store to meeting one of the countries most famous chefs. Alexander walked into the building first, remembering back on what exactly got him into this spot. A few days ago a scout had been undercover as a customer in the family diner and called Alex in for recommendation to have a word with a certain chef and an interview to work for him in his restaurant. “I’m kind of nervous.” He said, taking a look back at Jake for support, loosening up his tie from his neck. The boy chuckled. “The last time I wore a suit was in years.” Jake ruffled up his suit as well, feeling a bit uncomfortable in something un-relaxed. “Don’t worry. I’ll stay behind you during your interview, so don’t choke.” He nodded as he pushed the elevator button taking one step first and dragging his friend along right behind him. “The 17th floor, right?” He reassured himself that he was correct before lightly pressing the button which then lighted up signaling their destination. Stumbling as the elevator sent a sudden push of energy from the bottom, Jake held onto a metal-bar which connected the wall of the elevator. Alex on the other hand fixed his hair using the mirror available inside. “These dumb boxes always take forever movin’ on up.” He clenched his teeth as the electricity inside had turned off and their ride had come to a complete stop. “Uhm…aren’t the doors supposed to open now?” He banged his fist onto the sliding door in front, but the attempt was futile. Jake went towards the control panel and searched for an alert button. “We’ll be out of her in a jiff.” He said as he quickly jolted his finger onto the button. Jake waited for an intercom to come on or something of the sort. “That’s odd. I guess even the alarm system for the elevator runs on electricity only.” “W-what does that mean? I saw a preview for a movie like this once!” Alexander slowly slid to the carpeted flooring. “These people were trapped in an elevator and a monster tried finding ways to kill them by using torture and manipulation!” The boy chuckled a bit. “Even for a ghost-hater like me, that sounds a little too far-fetched. Anyway this is a busy complex, so this elevator is bound to get checked soon.” They both took time to relax and wait. Waiting seemed to be the easier thing than relaxing. The temperature inside seemed to rise and the size of the elevator was making things a bit hard to get comfortable. First, minutes of silence then nearly half an hour passed in a flash. “This suit doesn’t help at all.” Alexander whined, taking off the outer layer of his clothing, but still feeling dehydrated after. He started to pant, extending his tongue out of his mouth every few seconds. The boy glimpsed at Jake and wondered how he managed to look calm. He crawled on the floor and gave a grasp to his hand. “You’re cold!” He shouted in shock, thinking how he could stay cool for that long. “I guess I’m cold-blooded.” He loosened up his grasp and placed his palm back onto his knee. “You’ve gotta help me out, I’m heating up!” Alexander completed in taking off his suit, and then he began to work on his friends. He quivered as his buttons were being undone. “What are you doing, pervert?!” “You’re not sharing your coldness.” He finished removing the suit and he planted his own chest against the other boy. “Ahh…” Alex sighed in relief. “This feels a lot better.” Jake secretly enjoyed having his body pressed up against the other boy’s, but denied himself to take it any farther than that. “Wanna’?” He moved his body back and gave a sly look at the shorter boy. “Want to what?” He questioned in surprise; his cheeks turning a bright red clearly signaling that he knew what he meant. Alexander took the first move by pushing Jake’s back against the wall of the elevator and gave a small kiss on the forehead first in which then they gradually both continued with several long French-kisses. Before Jake even realized it, he was swept away.
It actually isn't finished, but whatever. It's a part that didn't make it into the story. | |
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souldragon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 287 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 29 Location : Turn around.
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:53 pm | |
| If I dumped my literary scraps, everyone would become depressed ._. | |
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Fluffon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 166 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:54 pm | |
| - souldragon wrote:
- If I dumped my literary scraps, everyone would become depressed ._.
Read before posting. | |
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souldragon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 287 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 29 Location : Turn around.
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:55 pm | |
| I'm not allowed to simply comment? XD I read most of the intro before the "spoiler," but didn't have anything pertinent to say, so I spouted something off like I normally do XD | |
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Fluffon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 166 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:13 pm | |
| - souldragon wrote:
- I'm not allowed to simply comment? XD I read most of the intro before the "spoiler," but didn't have anything pertinent to say, so I spouted something off like I normally do XD
Jesh, you have to read the whole thing. It's like...a law...or something. | |
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souldragon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 287 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 29 Location : Turn around.
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:27 pm | |
| But...But...The story was too long, so I didn't read XD | |
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Fluffon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 166 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Tue Sep 21, 2010 2:37 pm | |
| - souldragon wrote:
- But...But...The story was too long, so I didn't read XD
Really? xD Wow...that's kind of pathetic. | |
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Eternal Zohne Artist of Epicness
Posts : 235 Join date : 2010-09-18 Age : 30 Location : Look in the mirror.
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Tue Sep 21, 2010 2:58 pm | |
| Pretty good except for a few typos | |
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Fluffon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 166 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:00 pm | |
| - Eternal Zohne wrote:
- Pretty good except for a few typos
Typos are natural if you don't run it through editing. It's like saying this bread isn't toasted if it was never even sticked in the toaster. | |
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Eternal Zohne Artist of Epicness
Posts : 235 Join date : 2010-09-18 Age : 30 Location : Look in the mirror.
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:06 pm | |
| - Fluffon wrote:
- Eternal Zohne wrote:
- Pretty good except for a few typos
Typos are natural if you don't run it through editing.
It's like saying this bread isn't toasted if it was never even sticked in the toaster. I once had toasted bread with butter and boysenberry jam and I thought it was pretty good. I think having a hot drink with it would make it better though, I've never had tea but I think that might go good with it or maybe hot chocolate. | |
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Fluffon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 166 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:07 pm | |
| - Eternal Zohne wrote:
- Fluffon wrote:
- Eternal Zohne wrote:
- Pretty good except for a few typos
Typos are natural if you don't run it through editing.
It's like saying this bread isn't toasted if it was never even sticked in the toaster. I once had toasted bread with butter and boysenberry jam and I thought it was pretty good. I think having a hot drink with it would make it better though, I've never had tea but I think that might go good with it or maybe hot chocolate. BOYSENBERRY!?!?! OH NO! THAT MEANS IT'S BOYSENOUS!!!! *Coughs out blood* | |
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Eternal Zohne Artist of Epicness
Posts : 235 Join date : 2010-09-18 Age : 30 Location : Look in the mirror.
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SSLord Artist of Epicness
Posts : 46 Join date : 2010-09-10 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:24 pm | |
| Too quire for me. It was good for the most part until the last paragraph or two. | |
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Fluffon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 166 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:26 pm | |
| - SSLord wrote:
- Too quire for me. It was good for the most part until the last paragraph or two.
Yeah, I was gonna make a whoopy scene, but I was all like "Oh shit my dad is right behind me..."...so I just ended it. | |
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Eternal Zohne Artist of Epicness
Posts : 235 Join date : 2010-09-18 Age : 30 Location : Look in the mirror.
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souldragon Artist of Epicness
Posts : 287 Join date : 2010-09-09 Age : 29 Location : Turn around.
| Subject: Re: Where the hell do I dump my literature or novel scraps? Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:36 am | |
| - Eternal Zohne wrote:
- SSLord wrote:
- Too quire for me. It was good for the most part until the last paragraph or two.
Oh my o,o | |
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