New idea for comic,animated series

I could disguise a perfect into an action story, you simply have to make them humble.
Of course, I'd never have the patience to devise a plot... Maybe next summer XD

souldragon wrote:

I could disguise a perfect into an action story, you simply have to make them humble.
Of course, I'd never have the patience to devise a plot... Maybe next summer XD

Wouldn't being humble count as a flaw in some situations though?

Eternal Zohne wrote:

souldragon wrote:

I could disguise a perfect into an action story, you simply have to make them humble.
Of course, I'd never have the patience to devise a plot... Maybe next summer XD

Wouldn't being humble count as a flaw in some situations though?

I'm only ok if there's one character who tries to be perfect...then they just look stupid.

Honestly, there are plenty of popular animes with Mary Sues...

Shugo Chara...I mean that chick Amu is like in a love decagon.

I think Mary Sues are ok but only if you know what you're doing.

Humility is a noble trait. Show-offs are lame :\

Im re-thinking it,downing their powers,twin can now only create 2 or 3 clones each only as powerful as he,and having to make most of the fact by trying to confuse the enemy Bladda Bladda Bladda,reworking it. and it's boring but im going along with it as it goes

You know, this sounds just like the plot for a movie I'm going to make in Gmod. Not saying you're copying or anything.
One day, on the roblox forums, a group of the best Roleplayers gathered together and created:
Operation: Alpha.
It's about, where, Earth recieves a teletransmission from a distant planet, saying they would prepare for war. Turns out that those aliens got invaded by some other aliens. Sort of like the Combine and the Vortigaunts. They thought Earth was the home planet of the invaders, so then they were planning to attack us, who they falsely thought was their enemies. So, the government tries to mutate animals to give them powers and stuff, but finally the operation moves onto Humans. And the story begins.
It's got a good solid storyline, two main antagonists, a couple of protagonists, and one big plot twist, with many action scenes and such.

there aren't many good gmod videos anymore.

Well, hopefully, this one will break the ice.

Hmm... Interesting. To me, your story (Inter) has originality Just remember to kill off any lingering mary-sues.

Thanks.
And what are mary-Sues?

Intervention wrote:

Thanks.
And what are mary-Sues?

Perfect characters that pretty much ruin any suspense or drama in the storyline.

Here's an example:

A story of girl who has the perfect life where she's rich and had the perfect boyfriend and how awesome her life is.

the girl would be the mary sue.

Eternal Zohne wrote:

Intervention wrote:

Thanks.
And what are mary-Sues?

Perfect characters that pretty much ruin any suspense or drama in the storyline.

Here's an example:

A story of girl who has the perfect life where she's rich and had the perfect boyfriend and how awesome her life is.

the girl would be the mary sue.

Meh, better examples of mary sues are...


Hinamori Amu - Cause she's cool and spicy! I mean seriously...the new student with pink hair ends up being the first one to transform, and is in a love triangle with some gay prince dude and his sexy cat-boy brother.


Chocola- The best mary sue example by far. Pratically all the guys in school love her, and her two male best friends Woo and Soul. She ends up being the queen of the witch world and the evil world and gets a fancy prince boyfriend named Pierre at the end while her best female friend gets nothing but a bunch of haters.

Need yaoi on these two though!

Choclat... popular and loved?! *tries to hold laugh* Prfff... *starts ROFL'ing but turns serious again afterwards* Ugly face, huge feet and a bad hairdo... That's all I wanted to say...

And the other one... Baby face...